Year 5 children's persuasive adverts

Thank you to Hamzah and Humayra for sending me their persuasive adverts.    Hamzah, I'm really pleased you have used positive language in your text and  you have used a relative clause and parenthesis.  Humayra, you should feel proud, because your advert is clearly written,  it contains targets such as a bulleted  list and above all, the language you use is persuasive! Well done to the both of you!  Check out the adverts below.