 Hello Year 5 children, I would like you to have a go at writing an advert to persuade someone to buy a toy robot, pet (dog or cat) or a sports car (like a Bugatti). It is important you include your writing targets. I have attached a sheet which contains pictures of these things and I have attached a sheet of writing targets for you to download. In addition, I have attached an example of my persuasive advert to sell a Bugatti. Remember to use persuasive language in your short write too. Do your best and have fun! If there are any questions about the work we have set you, please email one of your teachers on: y5l@crumpsall.manchester.sch.uk (for Mr Ahmed-Swift) y5c@crumpsall.manchester.sch.uk (for Mr Tait) 
10 Comments
Casey
23/3/2020 11:48:31 am
hi Mr Ahmed Swift I am good
Tayibah
24/3/2020 01:34:28 pm
Hello Mr Tait
Mr Ahmed-Swift
24/3/2020 07:43:11 am
Glad you are doing well Casey!
Faizan
24/3/2020 09:56:08 am
Hey mr Ahmed Swift how are u doing?
Tayibah
24/3/2020 01:34:57 pm
Hello Mr.Tait
Mr Tait
24/3/2020 01:48:07 pm
Hello Tayibah,
Michelle
24/3/2020 02:57:12 pm
Hello Mr Tait I have completed my persuasive advert.
Mr Tait
25/3/2020 09:18:26 am
Fantastic Michelle! I'm really proud of you!
Michelle
25/3/2020 09:56:15 am
Thank you sir.
Michelle
25/3/2020 11:10:42 am
By the way sir I had written my persuasive advert about a pet is that ok? Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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