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Sana Nazim
25/3/2020 09:52:52 am
The foggy and beautiful sky behind the building. The building is old as pyramid of Giza.The small land stands on the rocky hill proudly. The sun rose in a pool of crimson gold spilling light all over the land and the white clouds. The whole landscape was bathed in the warming glow of the rising sun. The scenery star-struck me leaving me to think I was dreaming. As I reassured myself I watched the golden glow of the sun chasing the dark murky clouds.
Ruqaiyah
25/3/2020 11:19:56 am
Wow that's amazing!
Farhaan
25/3/2020 12:16:18 pm
Hmmm very good description you will certainly impress the class and miss Cloherty.
Fatimah 6L
25/3/2020 11:00:12 am
The foggy orange beautiful sky with Rocky mountains . The building was old as a shelf with broken Windows.
Ruqaiyah
25/3/2020 11:19:21 am
Far away in the distance, I could see land. Land that wasn't floating. Once I was deep into my thoughts, I was startled by the machinery starting. The sun was landing whilst the moon was taking its place high in the sky. The summer breeze blew my long, black hair back. The mountains below us were peaceful, whilst up here,we were making this noise,that was disrupting the world.
Mahek 6L
25/3/2020 11:33:56 am
The clouds below us flashed as thunder roared beneath. Whirring cogs worked endlessly as our floating island flew through the misty sky, looking for a new,wondrous place to explore..
Ruqaiyah
25/3/2020 07:44:28 pm
That's amazing!
Farhaan
25/3/2020 12:07:42 pm
I could hear machinery grinding as I walked a long an isolated shaft reaking of corpses and remains of animals.
Farhaan
25/3/2020 12:14:16 pm
I want to add to my description I lurked across the floating island as if in a concussion the sun faded quicker than you could say in, I’d forgotten what year it was the my ancient -feeling withered head ached in torturous pain and anxiety.
Farhaan
25/3/2020 12:14:56 pm
I’m trying to be Daniels and be the best 25/3/2020 12:24:00 pm
Far in the clouds, beamed a sparkly horizon that over-shadowed all that was visible to the naked eye.The beauty of nature left me in awe, as I glared at nature at its best.The architecture, gracefully positioned on the rocky mountain lay beautifully underneath the fluffy clouds and the glow of the sun.
Haris
25/3/2020 12:38:08 pm
The haunted looking structure hovered above the deep valleys as debris flew under the floating island. The was sky blue and orange as the sun set slowly set into the horizon. There were large cogs spinning infinitely keeping the island in the air.
Mrs W
25/3/2020 12:49:54 pm
Well done - I like how you are responding to each other's ideas with supportive comments. What a lovely year group we have! 25/3/2020 02:30:14 pm
The sky was full of light, shining over the lush greenery .The streams of water cascaded down into the lake as the sun shone brightly .The golden specs of the sky evenly aligned the horizon shined into my eyes. Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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