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Ruqaiyah
27/3/2020 10:51:31 am
Done!
Farhaan
27/3/2020 10:56:00 am
Kashmirirambo Sprinted across the forest of prophecies it grew from toiletries like cardboard and toothbrushes and water bottles this is how the earth changed kashmirirambo used to be a normal wooden cup for putting in toothbrushes but unexpectedly he got an upgrade he was plastic.That made him greedy and power-hungry soo he tried to “ become greater. Eventually, he had been thrashed into the toilet with intense strength. This is why animals are now endangered. This is a lesson for us all never throw away plastic.PLEASE NEVER DO THIS OR THE EARTH WILL NEVER BE THE SAME! I hope this helped some people. Thank you for listening.
Maaria
27/3/2020 07:04:20 pm
Amazing wow that was wonderful better then mine
Haleema
27/3/2020 11:29:18 am
Done
Mahek 6L
27/3/2020 12:20:34 pm
The ferocious plastic monster roamed across the seabed looking for life to prey on.It didn't care it would be stuck-lying in a dead animals stomach.It just wanted all animals to be dead.Our waste made a monster,something so dangerous it could wipe out all life underwater and on land too!It would take years for this monster to break down and now we can't even burn it because then dangerous toxins would be released.So what do we do?Its simple.If people would stop throwing their waste into the ocean and buy wooden supplies,it would make a huge difference.A difference which could impact the world!
Abdullah 6L
27/3/2020 01:01:48 pm
completed the challenge! Jack ran across the damp,wet jungle until he saw a hungry tiger was chasing him! He didn't even dare to even have a small peak once through his shoulder because he saw a deadly tiger chasing him.It wasn't a normal tiger you would see like such as: Soft orange fur,black stripes that looked like belts,claws ready to strike and an evil eye staring at its prey.It was a white tiger slightly more dangerous it obviously had white fur,black stripes,sharp claws being equivalent to a knife but 10× sharper.He ran and ran until he saw a man just chilling in his rusty,black car.He wore:a swampy colored jacket,oat meal trousers and black gardening gloves.Drew thought to himselfWhy is he wearing gardening gloves?This isn't a garden to find pretty flowers instead you find wild tigers chasing you.Anyways,he asked that man if he could quickly take him a ride home.Theman said,"Sure,Hope on will ya!" He came back home to tell his parents what had just happened later to find out that the man he had a ride with he is not supposed to know what is name is until he is old enough to realize that man was a- ....
Sana Nazim
27/3/2020 02:04:29 pm
i have done it
Tayyab
27/3/2020 03:05:52 pm
Done
Mrs W
29/3/2020 04:11:39 pm
Well done Maryam, Mahek and Farhaan - great paragraphs.
The sun rose in a pool of crimson gold spilling light all over the land and the white clouds. The whole landscape was bathed in the warming glow of the rising sun. The scenery star-struck me leaving me to think I was dreaming. As I reassured myself as I watched the golden glow of the sun chasing the dark murky clouds. I perceived the hills climb higher than the others the tallest standing arrogantly above the all of the other mountains . My heart beating swifter than a blink of the eye . The lake as glistening as rays of blinding light assassinated my eyes leaving me eyeless . Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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