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Year 5's Blog...

Year 5 children's persuasive adverts

26/3/2020

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Thank you to Hamzah and Humayra for sending me their persuasive adverts.    Hamzah, I'm really pleased you have used positive language in your text and  you have used a relative clause and parenthesis.  Humayra, you should feel proud, because your advert is clearly written,  it contains targets such as a bulleted  list and above all, the language you use is persuasive! Well done to the both of you!  Check out the adverts below.
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Michelle
27/3/2020 09:54:33 am

Hello Hamzah your advert was super congrats good job.
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Hammad
27/3/2020 07:02:50 pm

Sir how do people send you things cause I might do it to :)

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Mr Tait
29/3/2020 02:49:43 pm

Hi Hammad,

It's great to hear that you are taking part in the online learning! I suggest you take a photo of any work you do and then attach the photo to an e-mail. Send any work to: y5C@crumpsall.manchester.sch.uk

Or you can type your work up in Microsoft word and then attach the document to an e-mail. As before, just send the document to the e-mail address above. Take care and keep safe!

Mr Tait

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