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Tuesday's english

7/4/2020

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​Hello Year 5 children,
This morning, I would like you to have a go at writing another advert to persuade someone to go on holiday to Florida, USA to see the Everglades.  You need to pretend to be a travel agent selling a holiday to a customer.  It is important you include your writing targets.  I have attached a sheet of writing targets for you to download and I have uploaded an example of my persuasive advert to persuade someone to travel to see the Everglades.  Remember to use persuasive language in your short write too.  To remind you what the Everglades are, I have attached some information about the Everglades below.
 
Do you dream of going on an incredible adventure?  Do you want to see one of the most beautiful places on earth?  Then, we may have the answer to your prayers!  Currently, we are selling a holiday to the Florida (one of the most popular holiday destinations in the world) at the bargain price of £1,000 including flights.  During your holiday to Florida, you can visit the fascinating Everglades.  The Everglades, which is a unique wetland, has many fascinating animals to see such as crocodiles, panthers and flamingos.  Although a few of you may think this adventure holiday could be dangerous, you will always have experienced wildlife experts with you to keep you safe.  What are you waiting for?  Contact us now for your experience of a lifetime!
 
I look forward to reading your persuasive adverts.  Please send your adverts to:
year5l@crumpsall.manchester.sch.uk    (for Mr Ahmed-Swift)
year5c@crumpsall.manchester.sch.uk    (for Mr Tait)
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